Kass ([info]kassrachel) wrote,
@ 2005-10-19 21:54:00
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Current music:Joss singing the Firefly theme
Entry tags:firefly, firefly-fiction, serenity

Firefly story!
The careful observer may have noticed that I'm deep in fannish love for Firefly (and Serenity) these days. In some ways this resembles every other fannish obsession I've had; I'm wild about the characters and I'm apparently capable of watching the episodes an infinite number of times. In other ways, though, this one's new. I'm not invested in a pairing, here, the way I usually am with my fannish shows; I'm into the whole ensemble.

As evidenced by the fact that I'm bizarrely writing gen.

This story grew out of a single vignette, which I wrote and polished and which turned out to measure exactly 250 words. (Does that make it a duodemidrabble?) Because I'm like that, I decided all five of the vignettes should be exactly the same length. So they are.

Many thanks to [info]musesfool for her suggestions! Oh, yeah -- spoilers for Serenity.

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FIVE DRINKS


I.

He stood outside the shuttle door for a while, debating knocking, but in the end he just went inside.

She hadn't completely moved back in yet; Mal figured she still wasn't sure she wanted to stay. But the place felt a lot better than it had when it was empty. Not that he planned on saying so.

Mal stood there for a long moment, feeling awkward. Not exactly a new sensation where Inara was concerned.

"Mal. What brings you here?" She sounded civil, but not especially welcoming.

He rubbed his palms on his trousers. "I just...needed to be someplace where Wash wasn't missing, for a second."

Understanding flooded her face, and her rueful smile made him feel miserable and joyful all at once. "Of course. Sit down. Can I offer you some tea?"

"You got anything stronger?" He wasn't serious, but she threw him a look and withdrew a bottle of Blue Sun from the lacquered chest at the foot of the bed. "I'll be jiggered."

Inara poured a shot for each of them, amber fire in the bottom of her fine porcelain teacups. She sat beside him and for a few moments they didn't talk, though for once the silence didn't feel like he'd just stuck his foot in his mouth.

Finally she raised her drink. "To those we've lost," she offered.

Mal clinked his cup with hers and took a long swig. The whiskey burned going down, but it didn't hurt as bad as he thought it would.


II.

The first time he saw the shepherd drink it had startled the hell out of him.

"Thought you people didn't hold with that," Mal said.

Book looked up from his Scripture, not quite smiling but not rising to the bait either. "Jesus turned water into wine, didn't he?"

"That don't smell like wine." Had to be brandy.

"If there's wine aboard this vessel--"

"There isn't."

"Then this will have to do."

"How do you know that wasn't our medicinal supply?"

Now Book smiled. "Because your medicinal supply is clearly labeled. And, as you'd plainly see if you checked, hasn't been touched. I brought this bottle on board my ownself."

"Ah." A shepherd who carried his own moonshine; who'd have figured?

"Care to join me?"

"I got a ship to run."

"Indeed. Well, let me know if I can be of assistance." Book turned his attention to the onionskin pages again.

"You can't," Mal muttered, walking down the hallway toward his bunk. Didn't matter if he did come bearing high-quality alcohol; no fong-luh preacher was worming his way onto this crew. Period.

Though if he offered a drink again, Mal thought, might be wise to take him up on it. Bottle of brandy wouldn't last long, and he might as well enjoy it while it was here.


III.

The call for all hands got everyone into the galley pretty quick. Mal poured the last of the shots with a flourish.

"Sir?" Zoe asked.

"A toast. It's U-Day."

"Don't we usually just head to the least friendly bar in town?"

Mal shrugged. "Didn't feel like it this year."

"Will you really feel you've celebrated properly if you haven't decked somebody who doesn't deserve it?" Inara’s voice was all sweetness and light, with a blade underneath.

"Keep pushing me and I'll whack him," Mal said, jerking his head in Jayne's direction. Jayne's "Hey!" was predictable, but that didn’t make it any less funny.

There was a brief silence. "Cheers," Simon offered, and they tipped their glasses back.

The stuff warmed him going down. So did looking around the table. Wasn't everybody who should've been there, but when was it ever?

Mal stood. "Know what? I think I feel like heading planetside after all. You with me?"

"Always." Zoe sounded resigned, but kind of pleased, too.

"If there's drinks, I'm in." Jayne pushed back from the table.

"Doc?"

It was worth asking just to see him blanch. "No thanks. I'll stay here and get my sutures in order."

"I'll stay with the lovebirds," Inara said, smoothly. Mal spared a look at Kaylee, who was beaming.

"River?"

"Anachronistic practice. No point in it. Plus this stuff tastes like horse piss."

"Fair 'nough," Mal said, and headed for the door, boots and footsteps following.

Another gorram U-Day, but at least he wasn't alone.


IV.

Simon sat at the table with a mug of tea, reading. No day or night to speak of out here, but it was third shift; no one else awake. Ship on autopilot.

Mal pulled out a chair. "Back when we first hired Wash,” he said, swallowing how the name still hurt, "I shared with Zoe my feelings on shipboard romance."

"Excuse me?"

"Complicates matters. Bad policy. Don’t like it."

Simon's face cleared. "Ah. Actually, Zoe took it upon herself to explain this to me already."

"Huh." He'd have to thank her for saving him the trouble.

"...She told me to ignore you."

"What?" Okay, new Zoe plan: yelling.

"I respect where you're coming from, but things were -- complicated -- already. They’re less so now."

"How d'you figure that?"

"Do my job better when I'm getting laid reg'lar," Kaylee piped up from the doorway.

"Ai yah, hwah lei! I thought you were asleep."

Kaylee grinned, unrepentant, as she padded to the galley and poured herself a cup.

This was not going according to plan. "Okay, close your ears," he said, and turned to Simon. "Kaylee's like a sister to me, and I know you understand feeling protective of your sister."

"Captain, I--"

Mal kept going. "Break her heart and I'll space you."

He rose. Thank God that was over.

"If I break her heart, I think she'll space me herself," Simon said.

Mal couldn't help smiling as he headed back to the flight deck. She probably would, at that.


V.


The guy who sold it to him in Whitsun swore it was wine. Closer to vinegar, honestly, but Inara seemed to appreciate the gesture.

Things were going well until she said, "Actually -- I've been meaning to talk to you."

Tension coiled through him.

"I appreciate your letting me stay here rent-free while I figured out what comes next."

Ship would echo once she left again. Most important thing was not to let on how his insides had just frozen clean through.

"--would you be open to renewing our previous arrangement?"

Mal blinked.

She was still talking. "I think the rent was eminently fair, and I expect the income would be useful again--"

Inara wasn’t leaving. His whole body felt washed with relief. "Okay," he said, and drained his glass.

"Okay! Good."

He was casting about for what to say next when she kept going. "I would...hope...we could keep doing this,” her hand encompassing the two of them, the floor pillows, the wine, “once I'm your tenant again."

"Once you're working again, you mean."

Inara nodded.

Mal’s head roiled. Images of Inara with her clients. The nights he took himself in hand and thought of her. The knowledge she would never give this up -- nor should she, for whatever little he could offer.

How terrified he'd been of losing her again.

"Can't see why not," he said, finally, when he found words again.

Inara's smile was real. Made him burn. "Ganbei," she said, and refilled his glass.



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[info]lomedet
2005-10-20 02:52 am UTC (link)
oh, this was just lovely.

Mal and Simon and *sisters*, and the last scene is just exactly how Mal changed over the course of the movie - now he might be ready to at least live with Inara as she is.

what a wonderful set of bedtime stories. thank you for sharing them!

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:46 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you liked it. And yay, the last scene did what I was hoping it might! :-)

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[info]pearl_o
2005-10-20 03:00 am UTC (link)
Oh, I enjoyed this.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. I'm really glad.

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[info]musesfool
2005-10-20 03:03 am UTC (link)
Mmm...I like this so much, it's so very Mal. And the bit with Simon is both in character and hilarious.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:46 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much, hon! And thank you, a lot, for looking this over yesterday.

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[info]gritkitty
2005-10-20 03:18 am UTC (link)
I'm glad I read this, at this particular moment. I didn't know I needed a hit of Firefly, but I guess I did.

Lovely. Thanks.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:47 pm UTC (link)
I'm glad I was able to provide the hit of Firefly you needed. One never wants to be short on Firefly. :-)

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[info]ellen_fremedon
2005-10-20 03:21 am UTC (link)
Oh, beautiful, beautiful!

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:48 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm so glad you think so.

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[info]beledibabe
2005-10-20 03:27 am UTC (link)
You...

This...

They...

Er...

YEAH.

Brill.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:48 pm UTC (link)
::twirls::

Yay! You liked it! :-)

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[info]mz_bstone
2005-10-20 03:59 am UTC (link)
very good.

Deft.

B

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:48 pm UTC (link)
Thank you most kindly.

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[info]j00j
2005-10-20 04:03 am UTC (link)
I really liked this.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:49 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. I'm really glad.

Love your icon, btw.

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[info]ellinor
2005-10-20 04:04 am UTC (link)
:) Love the voices.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:49 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! :-) I do, too, so I'm honored you think I got them right.

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[info]ekaterinn
2005-10-20 04:22 am UTC (link)
*has a big damn grin on her face* This? This is gorram beautiful.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:49 pm UTC (link)
::bows::

Thank you so much! I'm really, really glad you think so.

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[info]the_star_fish
2005-10-20 05:48 am UTC (link)
Oh, wow. Those were just lovely.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, hon.

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[info]cereta
2005-10-20 12:00 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that's just wonderful. Sweet and understated and melancholy without being sad.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:50 pm UTC (link)
Thank you -- that's exactly what I was going for. :-)

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[info]cycon
2005-10-20 12:00 pm UTC (link)
Very good. You really captured the speaking style of each character.

I loved IV. :D

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:51 pm UTC (link)
You really captured the speaking style of each character.

High praise; thank you!

I'm fond of IV, myself. :-)

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[info]maygra
2005-10-20 12:04 pm UTC (link)
I love you. I adore your doubledemidrabbles, but you, I love.

These made me sad and happy all at once.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:51 pm UTC (link)
::beams:: Right back atcha, hon!

I'm so glad you liked them.

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[info]the_shoshanna
2005-10-20 12:44 pm UTC (link)
I am loving you so, so much right now.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:51 pm UTC (link)
And I, you!

Also, I'm glad you liked the story. :-)

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[info]sanj
2005-10-20 01:47 pm UTC (link)
You already knew I loved this. But I thought I'd say it again. :)

"Do my job better when I'm getting laid reg'lar" may have to be my new Kaylee icon.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 01:52 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you like this, sweetie.

And I would be tickled pink to see that line on an icon! *g*

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[info]laurashapiro
2005-10-20 09:24 pm UTC (link)
Lovely. I especially like the Book one. Great final lines. (:

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-20 10:19 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, my dear! I expect everyone who knows me has figured out by now that I have a particular soft spot for Shepherd Book. :-)

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[info]smaragdgrun
2005-10-20 11:05 pm UTC (link)
Me, I liked River in these. Oh, okay, I liked all of 'em! But not enough River...

Just great. You may make it so I can go see the movie again. Right now, I'm just not able to watch that one scene, with ... you know... again. (Sigh. I'm such a wimp.) Maybe I need some Blue Sun?

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-21 01:20 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you liked these! I don't think I write River very well yet -- I don't have a clear handle on her -- which is probably why there's not a ton of her in this one. Maybe next time. :-)

I hear you about the movie. Broke my damn heart, that one did. I've never wept like that in a movie theatre before. I was shocked.

...and yet I went back to see it a week later with [info]yaoobruni. *g* And if it's any help, I can tell you that it hurts a lot less when you know it's coming.

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[info]cloisonne
2005-10-20 11:50 pm UTC (link)
ooh - this was lovely. You got the tone just right, I think.

Beautiful little vignettes :)

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-21 01:21 am UTC (link)
Thank you! That's high praise -- if I got the tone right, I'm a happy girl. :-)

(beautiful icon, btw!)

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[info]spikeyboots
2005-10-21 01:11 am UTC (link)
EEEP! I cannot decide which part of this I like best. *loves all and gathers protectively like a toddler* MINE! I WANTS THEM!!

Here via [info]musesfool and so very glad I came. This is just such a lovely fic.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-21 01:21 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you like these little vignettes! :-) Thank you for saying so.

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[info]huggenkiss
2005-10-23 12:58 am UTC (link)
*squee* Love them all! 1 and 5 were great Mal/Inara moments but 4 was the best.

"Do my job better when I'm getting laid reg'lar." - great Kaylee.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-10-24 02:07 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked them.

Your icon is great, btw. :-)

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[info]bearpaw9
2005-10-29 03:45 pm UTC (link)
Oooooh! Terrific fic!

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[info]kassrachel
2005-11-08 02:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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[info]moireach
2005-11-10 08:59 pm UTC (link)
Aw, yay, gen and Mal and drinking and post-movie! Plus ganbei was the first Chinese word I ever learned -- in context -- so it makes me happy to see. Hee.

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[info]kassrachel
2005-12-11 03:38 am UTC (link)
Thank you; I'm so glad you liked it!

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[info]gryphonrhi
2005-11-10 11:47 pm UTC (link)
I adored this, every bit of it but particularly the scene with Book, and Mal trying to lay down the law to Simon (and Zoe's already having warned Simon), and just... wow. Thank you!

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[info]kassrachel
2005-12-11 03:42 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you liked it -- especially the scene with Book; I have a longstanding soft spot for the Shepherd. :-) Thanks for saying so!

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[info]ashfae
2005-11-14 12:12 pm UTC (link)
Yay!

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[info]kassrachel
2005-12-11 03:42 am UTC (link)
Thank you!

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